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    dots Submission Name: touch my wangdots
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    Author: Lil_Santo
    ASL Info:    19=I
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 34/52/15
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Longing
    Total Views: 10360
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    Bytes: 405



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    dotstouch my wangdots
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    Looking at the ocean I see water
    I touch the h2O while drowning your daughter
    she kicks and fights but to no avail
    that's what she gets for slanging the tail.
    I'm no scientist but I do know this
    it hurts to be at the receiving end of a fist
    and if you get pissed and fall off track
    Lil Santo is here to put you right back....
    Get my Drift?




    Submitted on 2005-03-02 17:37:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      why is the title...uh..what the title is?
    None of it makes sense(sorry!),
    but it sounds kind of like a rap.
    ahahhahhahaha


    ~Cruella DeVille~
    | Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok ..*drags in a couch* picks up a pen ....Lay down so i can play with you ...
    Who am i tryin to kid ...I wrote the book on mental disfunctions...*sigh*
    That's a lie ...A book was written about my mental disfunctions ....I need to lay down ..Scoot over ....Good peice ..Im giggling my ass off
    | Posted on 2005-04-03 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice. I love the first line. It's just cool. ok...I know I might just be really slow...but why is the tittle touch my wang...I know...I am tarted. but I really don't know why thats the tittle lol..couldya tell me? :D
    | Posted on 2005-03-02 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't worry Mykemical, I'm not sure either. But I love it nonetheless. Made me laugh You did good at rhyming, gah..I can never rhyme. It always sounds forced.
    ~Ma
    | Posted on 2005-03-02 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]



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