Description: I wrote this about a friend who committed suicide. She was driving a car and she had been drining, she had an acident and her best friend was killed. His name wasnt chad but chad is supposed to be the guy that was killed. If you dont know about the accident then the poem wouldnt make too much sense.... anyways i hope you will understand.
I turn my head to see the t.v.
My eyes are blurry and i still cant see
I have been crying
Why am I so sad?
I feel as though I a dying
It must be because of chad
I remembered him clearly a few moments ago
Now hes just a faded memory
I cut my wrists, the blood flows so slow
The pain I feel inside is numbed momentarily
I leap to my feet
And run for the gun
I'm sorry mom, I'm sorry dad
But if you knew about chad
If you knew it was because of me
That he was laid to rest so peacefully
My fingers on the trigger
I'm about to reconsider
My heart is pounding fast
Just one slip of my finger
Then a gunshot blast
This is vrey good. It's kind of sad in a way. I really liked the ending to it though. It takes a lot of talent to write something like that. To some people like me it's hard to write things like that. This poem shows a lot. Very good and keep writting.
Another one of yours I like...theres 2 for 2. I takes talent to write about something that hasn't happenned as though it already did. great self-empathy. nice work
Oh my gosh, this had a powerful ending... the poem as a whole is very sad and I am so sorry for the loss of your friend! I hope things get better for you soon, take care!
Submission Name: Accident
