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    dots Submission Name: Sad Enough to Waitdots
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    Author: omnipotent
    ASL Info:    17/F/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 82/63/23
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 466



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       No idea...This just kind of popped into my head and I didn't want to waste it. Enjoy!


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    dotsSad Enough to Waitdots
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    I was hoping you'd say something nice today
    So I'd have a lovely way of remembering you.
    But when the broken signs sway-
    Back and forth, left and right,
    I can't seem to wonder and ask who.
    I was hoping you'd look great tonight,
    To have her call and invalidate.
    Just so that your eyes go bright,
    And are forced to ask yourself,
    'Are you sad enough to wait?'





    Submitted on 2005-03-03 09:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was quite a random piece. I thought id comment but I don't really know what to say. It's nice but its not it just doesn't really make sense. God im not making sense. Um its good but its not I guess its just an average random poem. Sorry f I insulted you not my intention.
    | Posted on 2005-03-08 00:00:00 | by Broken Dreams | [ Reply to This ]


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