Description: ah another beautiful masterpiece created during a boring geometry lesson. talking about chords and stuff and me writing about mutulated corpses i love that class (note: that was sarcasm) anyways hope that everyone enjoys it as much as i did in creating it.
Skin Deep Incision -------------------------------------------
sawing through
the brick wall
cutting open skin
A sweet smelling
skill
carving pain
hoping for the end
lying in bed
staining sheets
blood red
breaking nails
intoxincating lips
it hurts to kiss
cutting open skin
a religious routine
i did it quick
i've done it slow
enjoyed the pain
the constant throb
are u listening?
have you put the pieces together?
or are u still asleep?
cutting skin
I've reached my bones
cutting skin
mutalated corpse
it became a comfort
a sweet addiction
to fill my empty hopes.
I remember when you wrote this during a Poetry Club session and I laughed when you told us where you had written this wonderful poem. It is through that the class at times does inspire this feeling. I liked the poem, it has your name written all over it. It is dark and gloomy, totally reflecting my feelings during the class.mutalated , the word is spelled wrong. This is the only comment I can make. Great poem and totally right.
Krysti is sooooo swxy! Ded bodies are sooooo very funn. Cann I come and play too? Or are you hording them all to yourself! Ded body hogg! Share in the mutilations! You’re no funn! Lolful! Thys was a very good write. Funny the things we think when bored. Huh? I’m bored a lot... maybe that explains some stuff... hmmmmm. I just ate vinegar fries- yummy! Peace, love and lick a corpse for me- ~#6-
I don't like when people just read the poetry and don't comment on it *scowl* this poem reminded me of Edgar Allan Poe's Cask of Amontillado meets Silence of the Lambs... but there was no cannabilism. I like the style of your writing, and also the fact you write murderous poems in the middle of geometry. : ) love
I honestly don't get down with the mutilation, depressing type shyt. However, the poem was good and your talent as always is evident. The imagery is excellent and the last stanza wraps up the entire piece.
this is what happens when they make people take geometry, lol, sorry, but I HATED that class... But honestly I like this poem it is quite interesting...It makes the mind ponder.
I honestly don't get down with the mutilation,but i do think you have very good writing skills. Actually I think you should read my poem Dearest Teenager. Yes I can understand being bored by school we all been there and done that. but wanting to her your own Temple, its just wrong.
I am going to read more of your writings,because I really do think u have talent as a writer. I never judge anyone.
Good peice ...It had a calm sort of feel about it ...which is weird considering the topic ... breaking nails intoxincating lips it hurts to kiss I love those lines ....Also keen on the religious routine ....Im suprised alot of people didnt get their nose out of joint over that ...But i can see what you are saying ...The belief system around cutting ...the addiction and passion for it is huge...I gave it up ...It took something like 2 1/2 years to do ..and its the hardest thing ive done in my life ...You have to comepletely rechange the way of thinking ....Anyway ...Im rambling ... Good Job
Submission Name: Skin Deep Incision
