Watching You -------------------------------------------
Last night I watched you
Deep in my dreams
Your beauty confounds me
As wrong as it seems
I know weíre apart
youíre trying to move on
And that Iím also paired with
But I was in love
And I think I still am
Itís like my heart is re-broken
Over and over again
I make my decisions
On what I think is right
But I donít know how
To avoid my heartís sight
I hope dreaming isnít wrong,
Because Iíll be seeing you tonight;
This darkness Iím encased in,
Will again yield to your light.
... I like this. I don't know what it is exactly, but, it feels familiar in a good way. I hear my sister and her friend's talking about their 'old' boyfriends or just some other person they loved this way. I don't want a second. I want to keep the first. Is that right? Can I get away with that? Sigh. I don't know but, do guys get tired of their girls more often than girls of their guys? Or...uh...
well... depends... i umm.. for one dont know how often girls get tired of guys... but there are exception in love apparentally. the person this was directed to isn't tired of me or me her... we just had some problems and she moved (moved back now) and now we are seeing other people... its just.. weird. Thanks for the post, i feel alot better after writing this. -- its true by the way (apparentally^)
Hey just wanted to say that im sorry for you felling this way and im here for you if you need me help with this....I love the poem...its great and It flows well. Even you know that i didnt post to tell you what i though about it...But i like it...i have had worse. but this ranks up there with some of the better ones that i have hurd from people. 2 thumbs up
I like this. It really sounds like a song to me. One suggestion-I would remove the "And" at the beginning of "And youíre trying to move on". I think it would read better that way. Thanks for posting this. Very touching.