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  Submission Name: False Dreams
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| Author: | shivaree | | ASL Info: | 16/Girl/SD
| | Elite Ratio: | 7.93 - 27/17/11 | | Words: | 234 |
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DEFINITIONS: Okay, some people have been asking me what things meant so I'll clear that up right now.
Amir: (yes, it is a word, a rarely used one) Amir is an independent ruler or chiefton, frequently used as a chief of a tribe in Africa. I used this because I wanted the teens to seem like rulers of their own destiny, trying to be independent of others' reality
Kyd: A dramatist from (I forget which ->) either the 1800's or 1700's in England
Artemis: protector/guardian of the young
I know this probably doesn't make much sense - it's really the rough draft of a song/poem/THING I'm trying to write. Will you please tell me your impression of what's going on?
Don't read the following until AFTER you read the poem:
The story was about to be to young (teenage about) lovers who commited a crime together, like robbing a bank, thinking they could get everything they wanted and run off into the sunset and live a life of innocent and love, etc etc. Well, they were found out and the boy (well I'm writing this from the perspective of a girl so I guess the lover should be a boy) came to the girl's house to say he failed and the police would be after them and instead of admiting their conspiracy to the police they thought it would be better to die together so no one could seperate them. ----- That's what it was supposed to be, but did the poem make sense to you or did I give the impression that something else completly was going on? |
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False Dreams
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Can you dream
Can you flee
Can you be see somebody else
What did you do?
Can you please dream it away
Can we please flee far away
Why did we have to go down like this
We had so much cavalier, my dear
And in our young, foolish amir way
To eachother we were Artemis
And we failed and our innocence was lost
And we fell from lovileness into the dark
Tell me now, the world's closing in
Exactly what you did
Oh the kyd-like drama is closing in
Yes I still love you
As my bitter sweat tears proclaim
If I did not love you
It wouldn't kill me to say
"You hurt me - You betrayed me - You led me astray"
The sirens won't permit us
A calm goodbye
You hurridly take me in your arms
Crying your appologies
My bittersweet tears kiss your shirt
As I sob against you and the world grows dim
We tried to grab it all and we couldn't of failed more
The red lights flash accenting the sirens out our door
Goodbye life and goodbye failure
This pill will make you come no more
We embrace our failure and we fall together
They can't make us say what we did
Sometimes love are the wings lift you
Sometimes its the stone that drags you under |
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