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    dots Submission Name: Painless Suicidedots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPainless Suicidedots
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    this blade has lost its color
    this pain is duller now
    these pills won't make it go away
    they just take away the hate
    the hate I have for me
    the hate that makes me bleed
    the hate that turns to pain
    the hate that hates this place

    my life feels colder
    the pain seems so numb
    these pills can't bring me back
    am I alive?
    does this blood mean I am real
    when you took my fucking heart
    you took all I feel
    now from hate I no longer hide
    this is a painless suicide
    right at the point of health
    just as my scars have healed
    I took my life away
    I've rid myself of this place




    Submitted on 2005-03-04 14:45:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm. suicidel. nice. not that iam. just like writing about it. real dark. "does this blood mean iam real.." made me think a bit. what it was actually saying. loved it.
    | Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]
      Well hey, man this is some really deep [censored]...thanx for the b-day reminder...I didn't anything really, there was nothing to do..Im sorry for ur pain,its my fault iknow, but im stll sorry..i hope that you find somthing that comforts yo when u fel like this, somethingto hold onto...welll yeah again real god peice, ttul bye Jazz...
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      this was great though i dont believe in suicide
    i will submit my version of suicide it is called " Life after Death " i dont no how sincere you or your thought is on this topic but taking a life for someone elses pain is not worth it my words to live by are if it does not kill me it only makes me stronger. At age 43 i have seen alot of people do it but never ventured there and happy i didnt. great write keep up the great writes
    thanx for your great comments as well
    i am not sure if you read My Child it might make you feel better
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-03-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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