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    dots Submission Name: Light Exchangedots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 633
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       Just a piece about when the sun is getting ready to rise and the moon is still visible - kind of like long distance lovers always missing each other. Just random thoughts. Love, Peace, Joy and Happy Friday!!!

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    dotsLight Exchangedots

    Good Morning Star
    of Dawn
    your turn to
    after your steadfast
    watchfullness through
    In the early rising
    of Sun
    for but a moment
    both are visible;
    Celestial kiss
    of LOVE...
    retires night
    rises Sun

    Submitted on 2005-03-04 17:04:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a very inspirational and spiritual look at the moon and sun and how they see each other in the morning. It gives me the image of a shift change at a job that has to go 24 hours...like the guys that operate the Tower Bridge...one does the work at night, one does the work during the day, but no matter what, the bridge has to go up and down, up and down. Nice job. I like this.
    | Posted on 2005-03-05 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, this must have been meant for us to read as you were the only commenter...I appreciate your kind words & you know I know where your'e coming from...Love, Peace, Joy!
    | Posted on 2005-03-05 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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