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    dots Submission Name: Getting Awaydots
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    Author: Deadly Sauce
    ASL Info:    18--lady--NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 59/77/31
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 364
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 542



    Description:
       I know it's short, but it was my "plea" when I was really low. I don't want to edit it, I just want opinions.


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    dotsGetting Awaydots
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    Crisp…
    White…
    Clean…
    The smell of pain
    And anti-septic
    Hope intermingles
    With fear
    I would not have to say
    That something is wrong
    With me.
    If you are there
    It is assumed
    That something is not right
    I’d be safe
    Away from all that sets my
    Mind in motion
    With no familiarity,
    There can be no memories.
    With no memories,
    There are no triggers.
    With no triggers,
    I can
    Get better.




    Submitted on 2005-03-05 11:06:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      crisp, clean, and to the point i liked
    "The smell of pain
    And anti-septic"
    it's pleasantly obscure
    , however a trigger is nothing if it is never pulled
    | Posted on 2005-04-23 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this poem was very nicely written. You expressed what needed to be expressed. I think a lot of people would be able to relate to this. Job well done and keep it up!
    | Posted on 2005-03-07 00:00:00 | by demonickitten87 | [ Reply to This ]



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