Description: In terms of feedback i want whatever is on your mind once you have read this poem. Give me ideas if i need to work on some things let me know, if you can relate to some things tell me. I just hope you enjoy my writing
My Love -------------------------------------------
As I look into your eyes I never thought we would be so close
Until I closed my eyes and saw your face
I always knew we had something special
But I never thought we would be standing here together
The love we have will never broken
Even if hurtful words have been spoken
We've been through thick and thin
But we always seem to make it to the end
Our love for one another is to strong to be broken
I'm glad were here together on this very green earth
Because without you i wonder if life realy worth it
So today and forever i thank you for being my every thing
aww this peice is truly a beautiful one...im suprised that with all the veiws of it that no one took the time to respond to it...i would have placed it in the misc. section because it seems to be more than a poem. thank you for posting it...it was a great read. i think that you shouldn't think of changing a thing...the origanals are always better because they are uncut emotion...so if this is your first post of this and you thought it was good enough to post...(which i think it definately is)then why should you change it?? im going to read more of your stuff doll...thanks for the great read...i really did feel like it spoke to me. i'd like to get to know you...keep writing please...i'll be checking out more of your stuff. xoxox me
Submission Name: My Love
