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    dots Submission Name: Naturedots
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    Author: Katj
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 103/89/24
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Something small I wrote in American Lit, while reading Walden.


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    Simple pleasures do not consume my soul,
    Why do people insist on getting back to nature?
    How great is nature anyways?
    Tornados, Hurricanes, Tsunamis,
    Do not sound like a great, simple life to me.




    Submitted on 2005-03-06 01:33:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha a nice look at the opposite point of view. Simple poem which fits well with the simple view. i liked it :) I beg to question what simple pleasures you probably do have in your life though lol
    | Posted on 2005-03-06 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      unique and fresh viewpoint. nature seen through the eyes of a new generation, a generation that is not dependent on nature...not a bad write altogether.
    | Posted on 2005-03-06 00:00:00 | by pyrestarter | [ Reply to This ]
      Well a lot of cynism is there. There is no way I agree. I love nature and I would trade it any day for one of those skyscrapers. We need nature much more than nature needs us. It is nature who reject us because we can never reject her
    | Posted on 2005-03-06 00:00:00 | by neonlights | [ Reply to This ]
      oo this is different than i thought it would be. i always have such a positive view of nature, of how its so natural and authentic.
    nice to hear a different opinion

    the voice of a pessimist
    | Posted on 2005-06-09 00:00:00 | by andnow | [ Reply to This ]


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