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    dots Submission Name: my reflectiondots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    Description:
       i write this out to my Dad.. know it seems immature to say this but all he has caused me is
    so much pain,and i hate to tell him i hate him but there is no other way.....im sry Dad
    you brought upon yourself

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    dotsmy reflectiondots
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    Looking into the mirror
    All i can see is a reflection of you
    In a image of me,
    And it hurts to hate you so much but when i look into the glass
    I can see you looking back at me
    With your eyes that only see yourself
    and lips that only speak lies
    I hate being like you in every possible way
    I regret being yours every single day
    In my mind you are nothing
    And i can see your nothingness live inside of me
    And i pray not to be like you
    and make the same mastakes you do,
    But no matter how hard i try there
    will always be a part of you left to lie to me
    Because a part of you will always be inside of me...




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