Aw, this is very sad, but all the points are true. I like this a lot, and I know we can all relate to this. Number 8 sure is a slap in the face, isn't it? I know how that is. I hate that you feel this way. Dancing around my room like a complete doofus to the Ramones usually helps me.
I like it. Its really a lot different than a lot of people write. You have a flow that makes it all work. Your sadness just seems to come across. I really liked how you set it up as a list, but it didn't really sound like it. You really have a lot of talent. I hope you keep up the good work. ~Persephone~