When did you become my stars?
I’m lying on my back in this field of daisies,
Feeling nothing but my heartbeat…
[And this aching I have for you].
I’m whispering my dreams to a sky painted black
By clouds bringing a summer rain that hopes to wash my faith away…
The faith that won’t allow me to accept this truth that haunts these dreams of mine-
[The bitter truth that my whole world is in your hands].
And I’m imprisoned by this wish that I make every night-
The one that if granted will mean that you’ll live for me.
And I’m so scared to hear the answer to the question that makes me bleed inside…
I’m so afraid for you to tell me what it’s gonna be
This is a good piece and I will just say that when love is right you won't have to asj that question because there will be no doubt in your mind. as long as there is doubt, you can bet something is not right. Now this is only my opinion,but, I seen this kinda thing happen a lot in my lifetime and I think I am right. One of the great things about writing,to me, is sometimes it helps to get these fellings out and writing is a good way of expressing yourself as you have done here. Good job, !Doc`
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