1999-She stares at a picture.
Her hair is long and unoriginal.
Her eyes are non specifically boring.
Her smile resembles a cloned sheep,
rather odd and without feeling.
Her breasts are asymetrical,
a little flat, yet "perky.
Her torso, frankly, is a little slant.
Her hips and belly expand,
into a realm unrelated to the work.
Her legs are rather short and unimpressive.
Even her shoes prove to be,
A less than noteworthy finale.
She sees an unfinished piece of dribble.
A fat little girl, with blonde hair and blue eyes,
and she is ugly, at that.
She always wishes she was the girl,
at the top of the pyramid,
but believes she is doomed,
to chase a dire existence.
2004-She looks at the picture and then stares in the mirror.
Her hair, unchanged, seems more original now.
Her eyes are crystal clear and shining.
Her smile resembles a doting bride,
rather wide, and full of life.
Her breasts are so much fuller,
well rounded and heavier.
Her torso, well, is still a little slant.
Her belly and hips ever expand,
and they could use a good amount of work.
Her legs, still short, are more defined.
She wears no shoes at all this time,
Her finale is raw and bare.
She sees a building work in progress.
An overwheight young lady, with blonde hair and blue eyes,
but she is beautiful still.
She sometimes wishes she was the girl,
in the picture that she holds,
but she KNOWS she is destined,
to follow her every dream.
To be continued.... |
Submission Name: REVISIONS
