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    dots Submission Name: FAMEdots
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    Author: jermwerm
    ASL Info:    26/m/FRESNO CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 203/268/83
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
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    dotsFAMEdots
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    The world is empty,
    the souls are all sold.
    People get smarter,
    faces get old.

    Blood thinning out,
    minds thinking blank.
    Fire burnning hotter,
    death makeing fame.




    Submitted on 2005-03-07 09:45:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      okay. is this how you feel about fame? and the world today and the people that get sucked up into the whole thing? i mean. jeremy. please. add descriptions please please please. im not that smart and we all know that so lets not point it out to the whole world! good if i understood it.
    | Posted on 2005-03-26 00:00:00 | by PookiezBookie | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW!, the whole of history in 28 words.
    Need I say more! But I will. It seems the human race is being timed for self-destruct since the common denominator has no dividend to arrive at a quotient.
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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