Due time -------------------------------------------
I move forward one space
But still three steps behind
Is it time for me
Or am i lost in time
Realities appear that ive never viewed
A mixing pot of personalities
Which i never knew
Creative and Artistic
Minds open and free
Not bound by limit or hipocrisy
Right or wrong..who cares
This seems to be the way for me.
Virtual Gods and mountains of gold
Imagine the visions
In scripts lost or stories untold
With no choice but to feed what we are fed.
A playground of confusion.
Blind of the conclusion.
so most end up dead
A thinker forbidden not to speak my mind..
.But i WILL. tell you the truth in Due Time.
Virtual Gods and mountains of gold Imagine the visions In scripts lost or stories untold
Poetic and thought provoking...awsome view of reality, time and space with all the places in between. I really like this and always good when poetry makes ya think...I write and read so much longing and love this is refreshing ;)
Virtual Gods and mountains of gold Imagine the visions In scripts lost or stories untold
This is my fave part too ...Its such a non complicated peice ...And the meaning isnt hidden ...So i love that ...because i'm simple minded ...:P This was great ...You have a style i can relate too easily ... Good Job
What is strange, we as people, believe that the word truth has power all by itself, it doesn't it only when we put forth our freewill and stand up for it, does it actually exist. Otherwise it just 5 letters.
I really like your well written piece you had two awesome metaphor in this poem,which is rare,bravo
Submission Name: Due time
