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    dots Submission Name: If These Be Dreamsdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This was inspired by a film I saw about Micheangelo.


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    dotsIf These Be Dreamsdots
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    Tiny sculptures of god
    that flood my eyes in sleep.
    I am dreaming of Jesus again.
    Withcoming awareness,
    if these be dreams,
    don't let their beauty cease.
    Let me continue upward into heaven;
    let me never wake.




    Submitted on 2004-03-31 06:59:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's wonderful how his dreams--really never did end. inspirations for his paintings--he painted what he "saw" and therefore must have total recall--or been dreaming 24/7---and his dreams now belong to us through his legacy. Somehow you just said that--only better and more briefly. Thanks, this was an awesome litle write, Silver
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      i wish i could have nice dreams. i don't remember the nice ones - only the terrifying ones and then i'm glad i'm awake...
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      I like dreaming. sometimes dreams are so much better than life. a nice piece. I like the last lines.
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]


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