Description: The spectrum of emotions called love hits like your brain against your skull. I'm not in love, not yet, but with a little bit of alcohol I can extrapolate how dumb I'll be. Maybe how dumb I am, cuz what fool would want to see a world more complex than this ever?
God your body hits me but I can't feel it
Its so far away but somehow nesteled in my chest
Be God so I can love you at your Temple kneeling
I'm the One who makes the not me get to be the Rest.
I swear I'll go to sleep with you painted on my eyelids
I swear I'll wake with your name upon my lips
But you must be the boon that I earned for all that I did
You must be the Princess i'm to kiss.
Where have you gone, I know just where, but tell me just the same.
I'm just a Gorilla in the mist
Pray I've evolved after I came
The only way to surely win, is to know you'll surely lose
And I swear that I'ma surely win
So your victory i chose.
hah, hah, oh no! You know what? I love you even though you can be a twit. Nah, nothing romantic in that, just like one loves a friend. Why a twit, because you are so often so angry and you don't even let on what's pissing you off so bad. Do you need a reason? And then you come up with this and the comment preceding it just had me rolling with laughter. Cheer up for heavens sake and give us more of this type of good humoured fun.
What is happening to you Shard, you have gotten so...soo...sooo...poetic. It's awesome. I am really liking this polar opposite kind of thing from your stuff I first discovered on here.
"Be God so I can love you at your Temple kneeling"...wow, what an image. A man humbled, at the feet of his oh shall I say "lover".
This line here "Where have you gone, I know just where, but tell me just the same." feels a bit long. Maybe cut out the just where.
This line, I think would be effective at flattering the pants off of any woman, "I swear I'll go to sleep with you painted on my eyelids".
I am not sure that I knew you had this in you, but Hell Yeah man, you are versatile and I'm loving it.
Submission Name: Concussion
