Description: I had another very bad poem with this title. I'd always like the title and hated the poem. I wrote this one yesterday and like it better.
Sense Makes Nothing -------------------------------------------
Some things you cannot dissect,
so keep your trite words to yourself.
You've never been where I am,
so shut up with your
recycled gems of wisdom.
No, you do not know,
snd if your words are sense
I joyfully embrace nonsense.
Amy, this one is a smart and pert scathing blast at someone I am guessing--always "knows" everything ---or at least knows where YOU went wrong. There are a lot of them in this world---I may need to borrow this once in a while -- I liked the summary of the last two lines. Thanks, silver
Its another 1!!! Can you blame me for liking your poems. I love this because its like when someone who thinks they can relate to you or think they know how to fix the problems you are going through but they really can't because they can't! I also love your last 2 lines. "And if your words are sense I joyfully embrace nonsens" Beautiful choice of words!!!
Lots of anger here. I suppose you communicate well the complete opposition of the words of someone you don't care to hear from. Uh, don't really know what to say about this one. Not very enjoyable, but not bad?
if i could raise a toast for every poem that comes from you that inspires me, well... i'd run out of bread. honestly cuddle, this is another great one. i have nothing significant to add - i liked every line of it.