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The Oldest OF Three Sometimes being the oldest Has more con’s than pro’s It isn’t always easy Ask anyone who knows. When other kids are younger They will look up to you They look when you don't know it Watching everything you do. It isn’t always fun Being the leader of the pack But you will see someday When you’re older, looking back. You got to do things first like wear make-up, and date Your clothes were always newer No “Hand-me-downs-too-late” Every single detail recorded There in your Baby Book The younger babies had one too. It never got a second look. You were your Mom’s first true love The first to make her feel complete You were first to fill her heart with joy When she heard your little heart beat. You didn’t have to share with anyone The attention she gave to you For a while you had her all to yourself For a while she had you too. BE thankful for that time That you had her for yourself Your sisters never had it all There was always someone else. Remember you ‘re the oldest when responsibilty seems too large Be glad you are the oldest Or your sister would be in charge. Watch out for them and help them Teach them things you have learned As they grow up behind you Giving you the respect you’ve earned. The girl you let them see As you all grow up together Will be the girl they hope to be Your adoring fans forever. Be a leader everyday Setting good examples is a must As time goes on, you will become A leader they can trust. When being oldest makes you crazy and you want to run away Think about that college You will be leaving for someday. And keep in mind the good stuff that being oldest brings Remember you were the first To do so many things. When life seem really hard and you find you want to shout Keep setting a good example That’s what being older is about. |
Hej RJ Nice poem ;0) I have read your poem a couple of times, the flow in the poem is okay, but I think you could make it even better, by removing some of the lines, some of the words and bring forward, what you really had i mind when you wrote it. When I read it, I got lost a couåple of times in all the words you have used. Fx. Sometimes being the oldest It isn’t always easy Ask anyone who knows. They will look up to you They look when you don't know it Watching everything you do. It isn’t always fun and so on. I know it is your stile, but I just think it could make it more exiting to read ;0) Keep writing ;0) KNS | Posted on 2005-03-08 00:00:00 | by KNS | [ Reply to This ] | |