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    dots Submission Name: cody # 2dots
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    Author: poetsoul
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 109/151/32
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotscody # 2dots
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    you once told me i only said i loved you during sex....
    our love WAS sex.
    were alot more alike than you think "kid"
    we just hide ourselves from people.
    including eachother.
    you never loved me...
    but then, i never loved you..
    how can we love anybody when we dont love ourselves?




    Submitted on 2005-03-08 09:06:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem has a lot of meaning behind it. Some people will have sex and think hmm we are in love we have to be, thats not true. The fact that your writing about this in this manner is quite repressing to an extreem measure of detail. you should put how you feel during this seemingly irritating task. I liked this poem but you should make it longer and make it seem like he is the bad guy its more dramatic and it would propell a better story line to this poem.
    Thanks for the write and enjoy the days ahead.

    ACE
    | Posted on 2005-03-08 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]



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