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    dots Submission Name: Smile Everlastingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 638
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 298



    Description:
       My son is here for two weeks and he just inspires me. Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsSmile Everlastingdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Life mundane
    is
    But The
    Separation
    of
    God
    &
    Man
    But briefly
    Eternal
    Find Mind's
    Eye
    No Time
    Like the
    Beauty
    Of
    Love Tis
    Everlasting Smile ; > }




    Submitted on 2005-03-09 09:56:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very sweet and warming. It says to me that when we are separated from God life starts to feel mundane and useless.. but a simple thing such as a smile can put things back in prospective.

    I have to admit I'm having a time trying to break down and understand your unique way of writing. But I like challenges so I'll keep trying ...lol


    A good read.

    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]


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