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    dots Submission Name: Sower Idots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 878
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    dotsSower Idots
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    Upwards
    in praise
    All Life
    extends
    In
    powerful love
    He
    made amends
    out and above
    Soul emanating
    Light
    Vision
    restored
    we walk
    in Sight
    And in the
    Son
    He
    radiates
    Love
    The joyful feeling
    connecting
    us
    from above
    Separated
    from the
    very start
    He made
    us one
    soul
    one heart
    For all of our
    Sins
    He
    does carry
    in promise
    of eternal
    Love
    we marry




    Submitted on 2004-03-31 09:49:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well you've my insights as to a higher power already. This is however the longest write of yours i've read thus far. I think that's nice for a change. not that's it's a bad format, but it might read smoother if readjusted. or so i feel. you're deffinately someone special to posses this unique attribute, have a good life.
    | Posted on 2006-03-20 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i cant say that i agree with the content of this poem, but i can say wholeheartedly i agree with the sincerity and form...this is excellently written, and comes across as pure...i am looking forward to reading the second...as always, cheers...
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with malakai, excellent poem! Very sweet, and makes me think, I love to think! Great JOb!
    | Posted on 2004-03-31 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]


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