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    dots Submission Name: hold my handdots
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    Author: brokensmile
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 241/326/148
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    eyes were empty
    deep with sorroful tears
    faded blue
    at times darkened with anger
    pangs for love
    dappeled white
    bled red across her sleeves

    she smiled when she had to
    teeth biting through lips
    once refuged on anothers
    since
    tounge slashed
    missing
    sewn shut
    everything gone
    taken away
    one big infected cut

    let it bleed
    please let it bleed
    let my pulse slowly smooth over
    to a lullabye

    let my mind freeze over
    my heart grows cold
    watch my soul unfold

    listen to my shallow breaths
    and hold my hand
    untill death




    Submitted on 2005-03-09 15:53:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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