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    dots Submission Name: Goodnight Pyrodots
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    Author: dead,yetalive
    ASL Info:    19,female, mia FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.93 - 100/104/28
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       I wrote this poem in memory of a "dear friend" or rather potential boyfriend. The ninth-grader I wrote about in my journal. I'm not sure but I think he was murdered by a friend of mine who introduced us probably because he felt Pyro was getting too close to his girlfriend -whom I call - Goldylocks (because of her hair color and because I don't like her much -altough I like him). I was really sad about his death but I can't go to his funeral -for reasons beyond the comprehension of most.


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    dotsGoodnight Pyrodots
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    You were special
    You were different
    You were really hot
    I'm sorry that we never fought
    The "accident" took your life first
    The tournament could have led to more
    Between the two of us
    Goodnight Sweet Prince
    Goodnight Pyro




    Submitted on 2005-03-09 16:58:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short sweet tribute. I'm curious how your friend died.

    I remember my first friend that passed we were 15 at the time we thought we were on top of the world and death was decades away. how little we knew.

    be blessed
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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