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    dots Submission Name: genius stigmatadots
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    Author: etheariac
    ASL Info:    17/f/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 75/91/36
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 283
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 660



    Description:
       This is sort of beat... i like it because it sort of a flow about how insanity is really genius, and how the world is sometimes scared by different thought. Doesnt make too much sense to you all probably, its a little off the wall.


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    dotsgenius stigmatadots
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    God bless your insanity.
    They mimic and call you names buttered with amarillo adhesive sticking to genius minds engulfed in frightful soliliquy-
    call upon the waves,harness the great electric
    beaming and breaking against cerebral ricocheting to voice box
    ( the unforseen opposition)Welcome you fucking storm!
    Expression blocked by the myriad conformists,
    a filter on your thoughts,
    wrought iron bars forged by closed minds of steel melded to atrocity...
    Their tissues rotting green
    (with envy).
    How courageous, beautiful to rip these corporal limitations to shreds...
    Free at last!




    Submitted on 2005-03-09 21:32:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the line 'genius minds enveloped in frightful soliloquy' that's good.

    I like this poem, but I wouldn't have if you hadn't had a description of what it was about. There just doesn't seem to be a very good transition from the first part (describing the genius/insane mind) and the second part (the crapulence of the the world). If you could a line or two there, maybe just to give it some flow, it would be a hell of a lot better. personally, I'm not very good at that, but maybe you are.

    Hope I helped.

    IHS,
    zac
    | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by littleshuford | [ Reply to This ]
      What the hell are you talking you about? Monkeys? Horses? Fishes? Rats? Gorillas? Giraffes? Elephents? Whales? Eggs? Walruses? Lucy in the sky with diamonds? Octopuses Garden? Iddagadadavida?
    | Posted on 2005-03-09 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]



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