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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    27/F/Fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 305/260/57
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I just found out I'm going to have a baby, I'm 7wks pregnant, and this is the strangest thing in the best way.


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    Life has changed
    And now the pages flash before my eyes.
    Something so different now
    Making me wake to the new possibilities.
    I'm still the same person
    Yet inside I'm not.
    I will keep you safe
    So you can live out my forever with me.
    This will be my challenge
    My reason in life...
    To live as I should
    To be who I'm supposed to be.
    All for you
    And that is what you’ve done for me.




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      Nice poem. Tell the baby I say what's up. Don't worry about how thing are going to turn out. I'm sure you will be a good parent and the rest will take care of itself.
    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]
      yup, having a baby changes everything. and makes us grow up (at least some of us!) best wishes to you and the little one. be sure to keep this poem for him or her to read when old enough. it's a beautiful little tribute of love. well written too.
    | Posted on 2005-03-31 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah definatly congrats ...This is just really sweet ...A promise to your unborn baby ....It's amazing how much you change when you are pregnant ..and then even more with each year of being a mummy....Anyway ...This was great ..Congrats again ....:D
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      YEAH! congratualtions. my daughter just turned 2 in december. being a mom is the greatest "job" in the world. to know that this beautiful child came from inside you and will love you unconditionally for the rest of your life is the best joy life has. i am only 23 so you can imagine how i felt at 20 when i found out i was pregnant and a month after breaking up with the bf. scared to death was i then, but now, wouldn't change it for the world. need anything, i am here :) any question or just to talk of it don't hesitate to call on me. Good Luck with this next journey in life** You'll love it.

    Jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-03-11 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      simple, and a sweet testament to the precious life you now hold inside you. congratulations. i think carrying a child has got to be one of the most beautiful and scary things ever. i'm sure you will do it with style and grace!
    | Posted on 2005-03-11 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very beautiful indeed. A private moment with what will become the most sacred person in your life. Continue to write to your baby, save all your poems as a beautiful tribute to your child. Congratulations and blessed wishes for the both of you.
    Carol
    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful! Simply Beautiful. You will come to find that a love you never knew could exist will take over you. This child will be everything that you live for. And you will never again be lonely. Be all you can be for your child. Always give them as much as you can. Even if it's not that much. Most of all always remember to say "I love you" on a daily basis.

    If you ever feel you need any support let me know. I am a single mother and it was hard for me at first. But now, I wouldn't trade my life in for anything.

    Alicia
    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      First let me say this, you will make a great mother, congrats

    I love your poem,because it simple sweet, endearing,yet there's a twinge of I am not sure how I am going to be as a mother,bravo

    I can't wait to hear all the poems about your child and your journey along the way of having one.
    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Congratulations! Hope all goes well. What a way to transcend what you feel onto paper. That's how I felt when my ex was pregnant: Changes. I grew up quickly. Don't be stressed though. That's how she lost the baby. You're in my prayers.

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    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      What a nice poem to the life inside of you. Hope all goes well and that you and your child prosper. I liked your line, "I am still the same person, yet inside I'm not" Nice job and good luck.
    | Posted on 2005-03-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      very nicely written also thanx for your comment again regarding poetry i feel honoured that someone looks at it like art as well i hope you have a great day and keep writing your thoughts for all to share
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-21 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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