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Roses that scream

Author: neonlights
ASL Info:    20, male, europe
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Words: 262
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Roses that scream

Was it you?
I'm sure I heard you speak through the millions of roses
I'm sure I heard you cry, heard you laugh, heard you shout through your window

Was it just fog?
A blaze, a fire, was it a moment?
I'm holding rice and water
What will you take?

Come, come quickly
Seasons by the river are so rare
Didn't you see the Jordanian flower bloom?
Didn't you hear thousands of voices screaming, howling, eerie voices from the lands of poison?

Must have been strange
But we have to rush
Hold, Hold my hand I said
Leap, jump, avoid the golden balls- they wil burn you

Don't mind the lianas
Don't care about the pain, the blood
It's only a liquid too
Hold my hand, we are going away

Trust me, I know where I am going
It's in the prophecies
And I saw it in the dream
Heard the fortune-teller murmur it yesterday

Do you really want everyone to hear those screams coming from the roses?
It's the last opportunity
Don't be afraid, it's only a silver syringe
And then we'll travel forever

We have our ticket to Heaven
And we have sent all our stuff to Hell
We are are going, don't be so afraid, don't look at me like this
In only a few moments we'll be in bliss

Smile, smile
Even if it's fake
Fool the Devil, Fool Death
hold my hand and we'll escape

Lianas and roses that scream
That is our Promised Land

Submitted on 2005-03-11 14:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, you are really good at writing yourself...I enjoy this poem so much that I am going to look at all of your others...:oP
| Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]

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