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Author: diabolicmaggot
ASL Info:    16/f/The depths of hell
Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 15 /26 /11
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Political
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Our leader continuously spawning conspiracies
Distorted statements, mediocre deceptions
Idolize past sacrilegious leaders
Overrated promises
Demise of countries in your hands
Ogle miniscule problems
Trying to disguise calamities
Megalomaniacs of the world
Deaf to the truth
Blind to the cataclysms you caused
Appalling results to your actions
Quarrel with the world, then yourself
Abhor the burden of responsibility
Favor the power you have
Plague the world with your actions
A vision of eradicating homes to satisfy your needs
You insensitive, incomprehensible simpleton
You are a walking catastrophe




Submitted on 2005-03-11 21:19:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great protest poem. I loved the way you worded each phrase and carefully selected those words. It was a great read. I think it echoes the mind of every citizen these days who are tired of the [censored} leaders.

Crackwalker
| Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by Crackwalker | [ Reply to This ]


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