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Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 118
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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I did this out of pure boredom. Please nitpick at will. I am ready for all insults.

{Insert Title Here}

The title is gone,
The thief was Ron.
The guy from Harry Potter,
And I think I am hawter.
He cast spells,
I farted, heh heh, oh well.
He died from the gas,
I made my pass,
At his sister Ginny,
And got myself into a fight with some guy named Jimmy.
And now I am talking nonsense,
So I will talk about Final Fantasy hence.
Cloud kicked Sephiroth's ass,
But Cloud couldn't do it without that lass.
Tifa was her name,
Flirting with Cloud was her game.
When Cloud went away,
Barret said, "Hurray!!!"
Elite Skills is cool!
But what is cooler is a pool!
Im effin bored,
So im outtie and gonna practice some guitar chords.

Submitted on 2005-03-12 22:09:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You, my friend, are insanely random. These peices of yours are definitely something that a sad person would need to read, because the funny-ness...
| Posted on 2005-07-05 00:00:00 | by Siren Mengana | [ Reply to This ]
  This is delightfully strange. Too many people on this sight take them selves so seriously. It’s nice to see some lightheartedness I amongst all the sorrow.
| Posted on 2005-05-29 00:00:00 | by Rich | [ Reply to This ]
  Amazing how random junk can be a poem. Very clever tho... building off of the 'insert title here' thing. Again, like the others have said, at least you had fun with it. Many people take their poetry way too seriously. So i guess this could be considered a nice break from usual monotony. I suggest using a more varied rhyming pattern, tho, to switch things up.

| Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Ari Leukos | [ Reply to This ]

first of all..what the heck. and second, where in heck. Hm...well, like everyone else have said, this is hecka funny and ..random. I don't know what to do with it! I've never encountered such po- i mean, writing before. Hahaha. C'mon dude, you can do better though. And which HP book did you last read? Geez...details man.

Alright. I'ma go talk with Andy now!
| Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ]
  oh my oh my. Sephiroth, you are definitely creative in your own 'special' way. :-) A quirky side of me enjoyed this poem, another side of me thinks 'uh oh'. Lucy definitely has to agree with Kali on the matter of randomness....yes, weird but funny in a strange, strange way. My fav. lines are the first two...
| Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]
  This was an awesome poem dude! It's really funny and stuff and really fun. It's also random. Way to go! I want to see more later if you write more of these kind of things. Peace
| Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by Xochitle15 | [ Reply to This ]

Words cannot express my aweness of your randomness. It was really kinda weird but at the same time really funny. I don't know whether to encourage you to right more or roll my eyes at something such as this being called a poem. lol. anyways, yeah, that's all i have to say. it needs some work to be poetry but is still REALLY funny and random. which is probably the point.

| Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by Kali | [ Reply to This ]
  Lol, that is freeking awsome , I like it cuz your just having fun with it, I'm sorry but I'd have to say the best of it it the starting , heh nice job really enjoyed it
| Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by lilghostyme | [ Reply to This ]

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