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    dots Submission Name: Bliss of Existence (dots
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    Author: aghori
    ASL Info:    30 M Nv
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 45/56/18
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 605
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 338



    Description:
       After a legnthy peroid of warmth late in the winter last year a buttercup bloomed in my front yard only to be covered with snow the very next day. A spontainious poem with no edits


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    Pushing through frozen ground
    a flower
    ignores oncoming crush of frost
    and blooms

    a small yellow sun
    casts it's light
    from under the clouds
    warming my soul

    and like a kettle
    filled with blissofexistence
    I burst forth
    with laughter




    Submitted on 2003-12-30 14:21:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Reading your work is like taking time out to indulge oneself, simple and elegant, poignant, and most importantly: you notice the smallest things - which are often apt to give the most pleasure, and in turn, you are able to relate that to us the readers... excellent piece - as usual ^_^
    | Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by Transcendancing | [ Reply to This ]
      It is amazing how sometimes the smallest of things can make such amazing impressions. This piece, seems to embody the ability to be unique, and to exist despite opression.
    | Posted on 2003-12-30 00:00:00 | by Transcendancing | [ Reply to This ]
      The poem can be taken two ways, but for once I'll take it the NICE way. VEry sweet. Filled with hope...
    | Posted on 2003-12-30 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      the idea of the poem was actually a pretty sic but i thought that it was to stiff as if i was reading a story
    | Posted on 2003-12-30 00:00:00 | by AnDrew Guy | [ Reply to This ]



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