To Be Number One

Author: diabolicmaggot ASL Info:    16/f/The depths of hell Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 15 /26 /11 Words: 57

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To Be Number One

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Insignificant people Striving to prove yourself Desire to be number one Abhor everyone Quarrel with your neighbor Megalomaniacs Dauntless beings The awry world in total chaos Uncover the secrets of life Outwit your opponents Betray your friends The plagued world of imperfections Wise to the truth What would you do to be number one?

Submitted on 2005-03-13 09:57:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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OMG.. i love it.. i seriously like it very much i specially like the part of Betraying your friends... i do ask myself that.... what ppl do just to be better or be number one.... the things they do...make me sick.. i really like this poem...i'll happily read more of ur poems, i loved it..congratulations

| Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by anita_89 | [ Reply to This ]

Hey,I thought this was good.How you described what most people do to get where they want,even though they run all over people,it sucks but it's true

| Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by ColdinSummer | [ Reply to This ]

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