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    dots Submission Name: Nothing but Wordsdots
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    Author: LadyChaos
    ASL Info:    19/F/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 718/606/95
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNothing but Wordsdots
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    I remember the pictures I painted with words
    I remember there intricacy and ardor
    I remember bringing images alive with a fluent, amazing grace.
    One I didn't even know I had.
    Now when I write, there is no magic
    There is no compelling image
    My words are simply
    Nothing
    But
    Words.




    Submitted on 2005-03-13 21:47:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i hope you don't feel like this anymore. When i lack inspiration, all i need to do is listen to music, or watch a film or even just look at random pictures on the internet and usually the cogs start to turn in my mind formulating something.

    maybe you could try this? good luck
    | Posted on 2005-12-25 00:00:00 | by Senna27NZ | [ Reply to This ]
      very deep, incredibly sad. im sure you will be able to paint such poems as you remember..just find something you are passionate about, keep your head up - words are never just words.
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
      you willl write again asyou once did... not saying this was bad... but well i gues you know what i am saying... anyway.. this was sad.. i know the feeling about not being able to write sometimes.. it just depends on what mood i am in.. i cn write very well if i am angry or sad..~Caroline~
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Caroline_19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Although I agree with these other amazingly insightful comments, I'm going to play devil's advocate just for fun. In this world we are promised nothing, and any promises that are made are merely pretty words. Just bedcuase something made you happy once doesn't mean that it will ever do so again. Cherish thosememories, and be able to find happiness where you are looking, instead of looking for where happiness can be found. Mere devils advocacy tho u understand.
    shard
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, I don't think that's true at all. I've felt that way many times too. I think we all go throught slumps (I know I've had my share), but you have to keep at it. Just keep writing, and you'll eventually write as well as you did previously.

    In "I remember there intricacy and ardor," it should be "their." There are a also a couple of places I thought you needed periods or semicolons, but that is your cause.
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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