Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Nothing but Wordsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LadyChaos
    ASL Info:    19/F/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 718/606/95
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1135
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 347



    Description:
       Hm...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNothing but Wordsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I remember the pictures I painted with words
    I remember there intricacy and ardor
    I remember bringing images alive with a fluent, amazing grace.
    One I didn't even know I had.
    Now when I write, there is no magic
    There is no compelling image
    My words are simply
    Nothing
    But
    Words.




    Submitted on 2005-03-13 21:47:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      i hope you don't feel like this anymore. When i lack inspiration, all i need to do is listen to music, or watch a film or even just look at random pictures on the internet and usually the cogs start to turn in my mind formulating something.

    maybe you could try this? good luck
    | Posted on 2005-12-25 00:00:00 | by Senna27NZ | [ Reply to This ]
      very deep, incredibly sad. im sure you will be able to paint such poems as you remember..just find something you are passionate about, keep your head up - words are never just words.
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
      you willl write again asyou once did... not saying this was bad... but well i gues you know what i am saying... anyway.. this was sad.. i know the feeling about not being able to write sometimes.. it just depends on what mood i am in.. i cn write very well if i am angry or sad..~Caroline~
    | Posted on 2005-03-13 00:00:00 | by Caroline_19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Although I agree with these other amazingly insightful comments, I'm going to play devil's advocate just for fun. In this world we are promised nothing, and any promises that are made are merely pretty words. Just bedcuase something made you happy once doesn't mean that it will ever do so again. Cherish thosememories, and be able to find happiness where you are looking, instead of looking for where happiness can be found. Mere devils advocacy tho u understand.
    shard
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, I don't think that's true at all. I've felt that way many times too. I think we all go throught slumps (I know I've had my share), but you have to keep at it. Just keep writing, and you'll eventually write as well as you did previously.

    In "I remember there intricacy and ardor," it should be "their." There are a also a couple of places I thought you needed periods or semicolons, but that is your cause.
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    50291

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Summer written by layDsayD
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    One Day written by WriteSomething
    Linger written by saartha
    Push written by JanePlane

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry