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    dots Submission Name: Quicksilverdots
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    Author: aghori
    ASL Info:    30 M Nv
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 45/56/18
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 487
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



    Description:
       CBE type poem, penned to impress a girl :)


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    dotsQuicksilverdots
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    Quicksilver

    the sex of you
    rolling and shifting
    running in rivers
    up and down the spiderwork lattice
    of your skin
    pooling in the crease
    under breasts
    behind knees
    an eternal tide
    in the sway of hips
    thick and languid
    tinged green with power and fertility
    heavy with the aroma of sweet black tar and sweat
    the sex of you
    pours over me
    a million poppies
    in one bud




    Submitted on 2003-12-30 14:37:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yay, sexy poem! It's very bold, and the first and last lines are kind of complement each other.
    | Posted on 2003-12-30 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      this i like. so little was said, yet the picture in my mind so full. carnal.
    | Posted on 2004-01-11 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]



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