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    dots Submission Name: "SOLONG&THANKSFORTHEHANDJOB"dots
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    Author: LameMansTerms
    ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713/1012/165
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots"SOLONG&THANKSFORTHEHANDJOB"dots
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    I'm sorry
    for wanting
    you to do
    something
    else
    Something more
    than what I've done
    before
    so many times
    myself

    L A M E M A N S T E R M S




    Submitted on 2005-03-14 05:45:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmn...well...hmmn...i'm not really sure to thiunk of this one ...i understand it and everything...i guess with the title i jusrt expected something diffrent ...lol...though you said it..you didnt really say it.,...know what i mean...i guess thats cool...you wereable to get your point across with out really saying more because of the title itself...which is really cool...wow this comment sounds toatally lame...but whats great about this write is if the title wasn't there...it could be written about something toatally diffrent...or i'm weird...purp
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't believe I'm saying this, but this is one of the best things you've written. I say this because you speak so much in literal terms but this has added layers. Yes, the title gives a lot away, but titles can be deceiving too. This is very open ended and can be taken light-heartedly for it's literal meaning (which is still kinda sexy really) but then it could mean a million different things, but all boiling down to one simple point - you're really not helping me if you're doing something for me that I can easily do myself.

    Excellent work here, really...truly.

    Personally, I love a good hand job. You'd never hear me compaining about that one...maybe I'm just lazy, maybe it just helps in the next fantasy and maybe I just love interpretation
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by deadndreaming | [ Reply to This ]
      thanks for making me smile. it was funny in some ways and in others it was a touch like reality. i'm going to be honest, i hate giving handjobs. it's just boring and just kind of annoying. u guys r guys, u have all the time in the world to do it for urselves. and from my experiences, most guys rn't sorry for wanting chicks to do more than what they feel comfortable doing. but, i think that u showed a different side of guys that most girls don't get to see.
    ~Jess
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by shmuzzelle | [ Reply to This ]
      LMAO...sigh. What an ending to a very strange day. Thanks. You really made me sit and contempalate the necessity of a handjob. Wow, that wasn't a conversation i ever expected to have inside, or outside for that matter, my head. LOL. I always love your work...a new look at somehting so simple. ^_^
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by I_Bleed_Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      well, i can honestly say that i got a good chuckle out of this..it made me smile, and was a good distraction from all of the serious toned poetry out there.
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by deepinthought | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmmmm??? Short, sweet, and to the point, not uncommon of a handjob hehe. I got a little bit of a giggle out of this one. Seeing a man, sitting on the edge of the bed with that, "well that was a waste of my time" look on his face. For the first time ever, this made me think that giving a man a handjob is kinda redundant. *scratches head* Like we could do it any better than he can, right. If you dont mind my asking where the hell did the idea for this come from?
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by pinurplepassion | [ Reply to This ]
      this was so great to find whilst i was looking around for something to read...i mean what better than something a bit more light hearted and to the point. it made me smile and it was so refreshingly honest! not sure it will be in an anthology somewhere but you never know...
    ellisa
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by ellisa | [ Reply to This ]
      You never disappoint me Mike. I felt like crap and you got me to smile. I knew I had to read it when I saw your title. It could stand on it's own. xo Mags
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by Magnolia | [ Reply to This ]
      lol i like it. i think sometimes the shorter ones are soooo much better. it takes skill to sum up in just a few short lines an entire poem.
    although, i dont think a chick giving a hand job is all that horrible...in foreplay. i mean, why the hell would a girl waste her time ONLY doing that? doesnt do a damn thing for us, and quite frankly, im more worried about whats going on in my pannies than what goin on in the mans lol
    | Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by SilentWhisper | [ Reply to This ]
      i once broke up with a girl because she stoped giving me head whenever I wanted it. I expressed my dissapointment in her change of attitude and she left me. It was only then when i realized that i let a good thing go over some selfish desire i choose to exercise no control over. This poem reminds me of that and her. This is also kinda funney too. Thanx for the quicky
    | Posted on 2005-03-16 00:00:00 | by spoken | [ Reply to This ]


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