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Author:	sweet-fire
ASL Info:	21/f/ky
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 296/279/42
Words:	122

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	318
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	741

Description:
well this is about my love...i always want to put on paper our love but ive found it the most difficult thing for me to write about. i feel it but i cant get it out. also poeple always ask me how i can love him after all hes done...i cant explain it-not even a little. i just know that i cant breath when i think about losing him...neways... feedback please...it kinda sux.

Reasons Why... dots

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I dont expect you to understand
the reasons why i love this man.

I could try to tell you every part
but i cant explain whats in my heart.

His smile, touch, kiss, and his tears
make me melt and capture my fears.

The way he holds my head to his chest.
The way he passed my annoying test.

Because he says he loves me everyday.
How he shows it in enchanting ways.

Hes imprisoned my heart and wont let go.
This, he promises and this i know.

Hes complicated and always right. ;P
But to me, hes definitely worth the fight.

I dont expect you to understand
the reasons why i love this man.

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  I like this poem and I do understand why you love this man
You made it perfectly clear you do and I also believe this Love is the real one in your Life
I wish you both a beautiful life together
God Bless
Your Friend
Ron
| Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  you say what some people feel in this one but not me been there done that and never again will it happen but i love it and its really great and it the first ive seen like this by you its nice to see some one in complete love and good luck

palin
| Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by palin_white | [ Reply to This ]
  A good love poem. Your expressions were real and heartfelt.. and it shows in your writing and the words you chose. I wish you both the best.

Take Care~
Sandra
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is great. It is so sweet too. I wish i had someone to care for like this. Or someone cared like me likethis. It seems that you and your boyfriend have a very good bond. Something that will be very hard to break. That is a great thing. The poem was great. It had a wonderful flow to it. It doens't suck at all either. No writing aucually sucks. They are all good in their own unique way. I've learned that over my time on this site.
Much love
| Posted on 2005-03-19 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
  awww...this was...sweet. I dont think I've ever seen you write something like this. It was touching, and it doesnt suck. Its what you feel and that feeling doesnt suck which means the words you used to express it dont suck either. I like it, for what its worth. Though not really my kinda stuff, you know that though lol:P Mushy love, ick, who needs it;):P haha...well...unusually happy for some odd reason or another...hmmm...Zane was gonna come over last night when he heard about aunt rita...but told him not too...:) Ok, imma go now...bye:)

->Dark
| Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
  this is really soft sounds like you have something great and sounds like they do to
love is a wonderful thing as long as it is working for you and not against you
nice write
sandman
| Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  I really liked this...i think ur right in saying that no one can understand WHY we love someone. Sometimes we don't even know WHY we love someone...and to expect others to understand what we feel...really is too much to ask for..but i guess all that matters is that we know how we feel. Good write! :)
| Posted on 2005-03-15 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]

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