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    dots Submission Name: stowbdots
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    Author: ceteure1
    ASL Info:    18/m/nigeria
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 6/10/6
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 604



    Description:
       dedicated to a friend and brother, Stow Benalayefa


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    dotsstowbdots
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    Stowb


    You’ve been there
    When all seems gone
    I’ll always appreciate thee
    For in you I see happiness

    My disappointments
    You’ve overlooked
    Even when I know
    I’ve offended you

    It wasn’t an accident
    That I met you
    No doubt you
    You stood like a brother
    When I needed one

    Thanks for always been there
    For in you likes
    My achievements
    What more can I say
    But to let you know
    That I appreciate all you did for me






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      Friends don't make the world go around..but they make the ride worthwhile.
    Kudo's to all best friends who have stood next to someone when walking away would have been easier.
    great write.
    | Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]


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