Description: This was written after seeing my freshman English teacher's favorite poem, about dewdrops on a wheelbarrow (which, I might add, the entire class hated....Including me.) The sad thing is that I ended up trying to imitate it stylistically for its deeper meanings.
So if you'd like, you can try to figure out some of my "deeper meanings," but if not, please at least tell me what you think.
Life -------------------------------------------
Life
Is made up
Of shattered dreams
And a little white rabbit
Hopping by
I love it.. I love how you described it.. But gosh I dont know what you meant by it.. I have some ideas... But I liked it alot.. Please im me or w.e and tell me what it means.. cuz it sounds really unique..
I don't know how i really feel about this. It really didn't seem like poetry to me...more like a quote. I don't see it as something that is in dept. But i do agree with you on the first part. Life is about shattered dreams. I don't get the last part though about the little bunny. Well if you want explain it to me. Much love to ya mikki
was it the red wheelbarrow by william carlos williams? I've had to read that one enough times! I like yours better. shattered dreams but hope as evidenced by the bunny hopping by. at least that's what I get out of it. pure and innocent despite it all. and full of love still. how's that for getting meaning?
....Not really sure what your deep meaning is but god do I love this. Not even sure why...wait...No don't even know. But I love it anyway. Yes yes life IS made up of little white rabbits hopping by. I did like what you did with this...something I just find wonderful wonderfullly sjd okay sorry about that I spazzed out. Okay something about this is just cool.
I dont really know what you meant by this..i can oly think what it would mean to me..and that is that life is shattered hopes and dreams and that people just walk by hardly noticing at times and they seem like happy little bunnies..i dont know if that is what you meant..but is surely what i thought..and i relaly like this for some reason..i dont really understand why..but i really do.
This is pretty nice, but the feel I get from it is too common and pesimistic. It seems like hter is no hope left in it, and that there is little life within it just a hole. Which is kinda funny now I think of it people like to get in in-depth poems but if it doesn't mean anyhting its just there, stating the obivous, plain as day and in everyone sight. Holes have depth as well which is what I get from this I guess if you understand what I am saying.
sometimes the shortest things say the longest storys. i like this poem its deeper than anyone else probably realises. good job with the thoughts on this.
Wow I totally didn't get this... maybe I'm thinking TOO deep, I dunno. But I would like you to explain it to me. Are the white rabbits good, whatever they signify? It's not like the thing from Monty Python and the Holy Grail I hope! Yep, totally lost!
Submission Name: Life
