I love this, the idea of warmth yet a frozen space that can't be thawed. Very interesting idea, and one I'm somewhat familiar with. I hate cold eyes, they always seem to peer into your soul. I like this a lot. Nice job.
Pretty real. Hits close to home I would imagine to most people who read. Otherwise open there eyes to that person who they see through. Really interesting, and of course it flowed well. Good job.
Submission Name: Arctic Eyes
