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    dots Submission Name: My Boydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 616
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    Description:
       My son is with me for 2 weeks and I just can't describe the inspiration and the awe I feel when I'm around him. Our divorce was not amicable and I've struggled for years with his father but it just doesn't matter when I'm with him...LOVE is not enough to measure what I feel for my boy - the Chad Man!
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsMy Boydots
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    To see my boy
    grow to a man
    One day walking
    then he ran
    To know he came
    from within me
    The best of his dad
    and of me
    Ever so proud
    words cannot say
    He's in my thoughts
    each and every day
    To see my boy
    grow to a man...




    Submitted on 2005-03-14 22:07:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's sweet and heartwarming. Children do have a way of making life seem brighter. They can also bring out emotions in us that we never knew we had. Good read, I enjoyed it.
    Take Care!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-15 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a nice ode to your shining light. Its great to be able to gain inspiration from another. You are a good mother as well. Nice job with the write and nice job with your son. Have a good one...
    | Posted on 2005-03-15 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice and precise...I likes. (That rhymed LOL) You give a brief showcase of how this child has made you feel and the changes he has went through. Anyone with a male child can relate and that's a good thing.


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