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    dots Submission Name: Helplessly Hopefuldots

    Author: omnipotent
    ASL Info:    17/F/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 82/63/23
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This poem was written during a "helpless" time in my life. Let me know what ya think. XOXO

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    dotsHelplessly Hopefuldots

    Time keeps skipping by,
    And I wonder when you will come.
    Hoping in the smallest ways,
    You won’t let me down.

    And I couldn’t possibly have anything to say to you.
    When my heart has sunk down
    And cannot come up for air,
    Who do you expect will be there?
    Hanging, swaying, holding on…
    Who do you expect will show up?
    Bleeding black underneath these facades,
    You’re creeping up on me.
    Easy…for I cannot see beyond the windowsill.
    And random numbers pulled from sleeves…
    And tricks holding bluntly…
    The truth…
    Slowly counting me through…pushing me through…
    Or rather, away…
    And I believe every word of your apologetic lullabies.
    And couldn’t part my lips,
    To shriek in loving honor,
    You’re name…
    To the passing winds…
    For I could not grasp any to save my life.
    I could only cleave to your hand for so long.
    And your fraudulence ailed me to let go.
    And wearing a crooked smile…
    I seize the breeze, one last time…
    And slowly, choking on hesitant breathes,
    I whisper deadly honesty…
    Just as the world begins to spin…
    Once more…without me.

    Submitted on 2005-03-15 09:46:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was cool. I feel kind of bad commenting on these without a real 'critique' . It's good, I like it. OMG, I am in class right now, and everyone just started humming... sigh. Anyway, this was quite lovely. I am a bleeding heart, so love and longing is all nice. Rock on.

    Almost sincerely,
    Your dying hero
    | Posted on 2005-03-15 00:00:00 | by bloodwing | [ Reply to This ]

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