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Author: diabolicmaggot
ASL Info:    16/f/The depths of hell
Elite Ratio:    2.5 - 15 /26 /11
Words: 8
Class/Type: Haiku /Angry
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Mortal abhorrence
cruel eternal suffering
chaotic morales




Submitted on 2005-03-15 19:38:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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