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Author:
diabolicmaggot
ASL Info:
16/f/The depths of hell
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2.5 - 15 /26 /11
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8
Class/Type:
Haiku /Angry
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Description:
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Mortal abhorrence
cruel eternal suffering
chaotic morales
Submitted on 2005-03-15 19:38:06
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