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100% Natural No Preservatives

Author: LucyDiamond
ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Completely random. Tastes good...

100% Natural No Preservatives

Arizona Rasberry Ice Tea
“What you see is what you get”
I am myself and myself is me
Engraved is my clear trademark
Checkered rasberry label
I can’t stand the nutrition facts
Whatever! Take a drink
Throw away the darn reciept
Because I’m 100% natural
With no preservatives
Just fructose corn syrup sweet


Submitted on 2005-03-16 16:48:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is cute.
I like the imagery and the comparison of you to raspberry tea! How lovely. haha.

| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]
  This was funny. I enjoyed reading it... Yeah it is random.. But its something know one would think about.. So thats what makes it original.. I loved it..

| Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was very clever and cute. You made a great use of personification of an inanimate object to convey an image of yourself to the reader.

Well done!
| Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]

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