That's pretty in a very sad way. Amazing Grace is a perfect choice of song for it. I don't know why, but it always makes me really sad. I guess thats because it reminds me of death. But anyways, the wording is lovely. Very original.
My favorite part is: "Amazing grace That damning sound It broke my heart And left me bound"
Wow.I like the orinal-ness on this.I've never seen anyone copy the rhythem to amazing grace before but even if i did this would be the best.don't change anything.i love it the way it is.definatly on my faves.great write.keep it up.
Great take on that song! I think you have just given me some inspiration for some songs in the future. I would love to hear it sung, bet it sounds even better than when I sing it to myself. Since it's an "take on it" peice there isn't anything I can really reccomend to change. You could make it longer... but other than that it's awesome. Keep it up!
thats crazy I can actually think of a more morbid sounding tune for that song... It could be a little bit better though. I can think of a few things that would add some "zest" to it.
Submission Name: Amazing Grace
