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    dots Submission Name: Chapter 4 (Out of Paradise)dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    dotsChapter 4 (Out of Paradise)dots
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    After awhile I started pushing Adam away. In the beginning of our relationship I was greatful for his company but my typical drama crazed teenage mind wouldn't let me be content with a semi-normal companion. Normal on the standards of the precedent set by the institute.
    I was bored and Adam wasn't satisfying my whatever it was that I craved.He was to much of an annoyance and he was to perfect. But the main thing wrong with him was that he had the freedom that I did not. He could leave the institute and I could not. This, in my eyes created a huge barrier between us. A barrier that no matter how much in common and how much he "got me" I could not get past.




    Submitted on 2005-03-17 13:54:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was good..Wasn't i the one who wanted you to write the fourth chapter? I think i was..well I love all you chapters they are all great...Now you just need to put them into a small book...GREAT
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]


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