Description: im not quite sure if this would be a poem or not. im starting to think that i have no rythem what so ever, so take this as you will please read it and comment. thanks for your time
My life's a blur
I go on looking for happiness
In strange shadows
This helps at times
But the happiness never lasts
The warmth of their embrace is sweet
Yet fake
Just another "friend" on another lonely night
The thought of you is what keeps me going
Always wishing
That one day the shadow will be you
With your lasting warmth
I don't know how I do it
Going so long with out it
You’re that one sweet ecstasy that every one tries to find
Well I've found you
I have you're love
This I know to be true
Yet not your touch
Nor you're kiss
What would happen if you knew of my searches
Searches for a second you
You would likely leave
Leaving me in an unbearable despair
Once only friends
You're kind words always brought me through dark days
You've said that we’d still be friends
Even if are love shouldn't last
Yet that’s what they all say
If you know you'd be hurt
And I... lost with out you
I can't loose you
I wait for the day we meet
It's worth the waiting for
No matter how lonely the day's till then
I'll love you forever
Some day I'll tell you of my crooked ways
I'll explain the reasons
Telling of my loneliness and heart break without you
I'll stop my lying and only live for you
I can only hope that you will understand
Not judge
Love me, and not always worry of my faithfulness
I love you
Could I ever say those words enough
I love you
It's true and I'm so lonely without you
Please understand
I love you
I'm lost without you
I'm down when you’re not talking to me
I'm crying cause I miss you
No one compares to you
No one ever will
You're my night-in-shinning armor
Be here for me through my trials
How painful it must be to have someone so close, and loving them with being able to tell them about it in fear of losing someone you need so much. It must be very confusing. While this poem may seem simple in its directness, behind it lies depth and complexity of this thing we call Life. Excellent.
This was pretty good, and I actually read it all the way to the end...twice...whoo-hoo! I cant tell which person love who the most in this one, the writer or the person it is being written to, but it feels like a mutual feeling...just a few issues that need to be resolved I guess. Anyway, it sort of falters at the end and gets a little too desperate sounding...not much, but just a bit. Have a good one and keep smilin'
Submission Name: Unfaithful
