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    dots Submission Name: Daydreamdots
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    Author: biwitchin_angel
    ASL Info:    28/ F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 15/12/6
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 327
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1030



    Description:
       When I wrote this the only thing on my mind was sex. As a matter of fact I wrote this about a really good looking co-worker before I became a full time home maker.


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    Whenever my eyes fall on you, I shiver with delight.
    Sometimes I daydream about what it would be like, for just one night,
    To run hands all over your naked body and chest
    Then everywhere they had been let my lips caress.
    Tiny fires burn beneth my skin from the heat of your hands,
    Such delicious, sensuous torment, almost more then I can stand.
    Two bodies pressed together, yearning for the release of a climax.
    Holding back by caressing and kissing while our bodies relax.
    You build the fires hotter with your mouth upon my breast.
    Your hands caressing my body with such zest.
    Laying on my back, I look up into your passion filled eyes.
    As I feel you solid frame settle between my thighs.
    Our bodies join as one, a sigh of ecstasy escapes my lips.
    You take us to the peak of climax with every thrust of your hips.
    I ride the waves of pleasure that you have brought to me.
    Two bodies joined as one, the only way it should be.




    Submitted on 2005-03-17 15:06:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh wow! I really love this poem...and i certainly dream that a lot too lol but yeah i love what you did with the poem...especially the rhyme... Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by poeticstorm | [ Reply to This ]
      I daydream all the time and yes it can be very vivid...I love the way you word things. A very nice flow by the way. I can imagine doing that to a certain somebody lol.
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]



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