I'm not sure what to make of this. It almost seems like this is something personal, maybe describing your day yesterday(?), with the man you love...so I don't feel comfortable saying "I don't understand this" or "I don't get that". All I can really say is that I like the structure of it and I love the sweet feeling that it brings...
oh, and I love "my royal drunk Don Juan"
oh oh, and that last line is as sweet a thing as I've read in I don't know how long.
I absolutely love this. It's so...pretty. LOL, love can be ugly, very ugly. But in moments like this it blossoms into beauty. My only concern would be with the usage of the word 'trip' twice. Perhaps another word could be used to take one or the other's place. Other than that, no negative comments. It's just so-pretty. ^_^