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    dots Submission Name: "Generally"dots
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    Author: xXxNichexXx
    ASL Info:    18/m/indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.77 - 69/96/30
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Theres many messages in this, i thought i would be pretty staight foward with everyone. The one thing i hate most about schooling is the use of rubrics. God damnit i hate rubrics!


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    dots"Generally"dots
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    Well i guess im generally ok,
    as the title would say.
    But a title is just a fictionious hook,
    to get you to take a look.
    Now when i write,
    i dont try to rhyme.
    I dont have any set rules,
    im not a rubric fuck.
    I make my own rules because writing,
    well, writing is art.
    Im painting a picture of emotion,
    a plethora of me, a blue, a green, a brown, a red mostly.
    but happily the blue is me
    And unmistakably the green is me
    And undeniably the brown is in me.
    Unbenounced to me the red is me.
    And the meshing of the blue and red that is me
    Turns out to be a green, that is conveyed mostly.

    And thats where the line ends of me,
    for i argue with myself,
    a contradiction of conscienceness and awareness!

    So generally i am angry
    but im not stark raving mad.
    And i wont have to kill you,
    for sitting on my park bench.
    Well life was "generally" made,
    to live for god.
    Hhahahahahahahhahah that makes me giggle,
    I am my own god.
    So does that make me concieded? If so, so be it.




    Submitted on 2005-03-17 18:28:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok....son, seek professional help, i read you poem, i loved it and i am goin to have my head shrunk immediately. seriously. goodness. what do they feed you?
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by grigori | [ Reply to This ]


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